Screenplay – True Thomas

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This screenplay was inspired by an old Scottish folk tale about a man who is abducted by the queen of elves only to return to his home with the gift of prophecy.  

INT. ELFAME - ISOBEL'S CASTLE - GREAT HALL - NIGHT

               Isobel sits at the head of the table, watching in amusement
               while Thomas warily inspects his food as the little man in
               the blue hat presents it to him, one item at a time.

               Thomas turns a suspicious eye on the man.  Isobel LAUGHS.

                                   ISOBEL
                         Ye don't like him?

                                   THOMAS
                         Fergive me, but I don't know him.

                                   ISOBEL
                         He is yer servant.  He is called
                         Billy Blynde.

                                   THOMAS
                         My servant?

                                   ISOBEL
                         Ye'll get used to him.

               Billy bows to Thomas, grinning madly but not unkindly.

                                   BILLY BLYNDE
                         At yer service, Master.

               He resumes a standing position and thrusts a pint of ale
               under Thomas' nose.

                                   BILLY BLYNDE (CONT'D)
                         Ale?

               Thomas gives it a cautious SNIFF.

                                   THOMAS
                         How do I know ye people aren't
                         tryin' ta kill me?

                                   BILLY BLYNDE
                         Would ye like me ta taste it fer
                         ye, Master?

               Thomas stares at him in surprise before responding.

                                   THOMAS
                         Yes.  
                             (beat)
                         Yes, I would.

               Billy throws back his head and takes a healthy swig from the
               tankard, spilling half the ale on the floor and wiping his
               mouth with the back of his hand.

                                   BILLY BLYNDE
                         'Tis safe.

               He places the empty mug on the table in front of Thomas.  

               Thomas turns the flagon upside down. One drop of ale splashes
               onto the table.

                                   ISOBEL
                             (laughing)
                         Ye must fergive our Billy.  We've
                         never been able ta teach him any
                         manners.
                             (beat)
                         Now ye must eat.  Ye'll need yer
                         wits aboot ye in the morn. Ye'll
                         find it... interestin' here.



               EXT. ELFAME - ISOBEL'S CASTLE - GROUNDS - DAY

               Thomas is seated next to Isobel on a raised dais, a crown on
               his head and robe over his shoulders.

               A beautiful HUMAN-SIZED WOMAN sits astride her horse, clothed
               only in her long flowing hair.  Hundreds of tiny people throw 
               flowers in her direction, CHEERING as she passes them by.

               Thomas leans toward Isobel.

                                   THOMAS
                             (loud whisper)
                         Who is she?

                                   ISOBEL
                         My sister.  Una.

               A row of MINIATURE ACROBATS tumble past them, followed by a
               MINSTREL playing a lute, and a string of DANCERS.

                                   THOMAS
                         What is all this for?

                                   ISOBEL
                         Why it's fer ye, Thomas!  We are
                         happy ta welcome ye ta Elfame!

               Thomas LAUGHS.

                                   THOMAS
                         For me?  Why?

               Isobel looks him in the eye and speaks quietly.  Thomas is
               unable to turn away.

                                   ISOBEL
                         Let's just say yer special, Thomas. 
                         We're celebrating ye. 

               A MAN pauses in front of them, raising a SHEEP'S HORN to his
               lips, he blows and a BLAST of sound is released.  

               HORSES dash past them, followed by a cluster of HOUNDS, all
               BARKING madly.  Everyone-- large and small-- begins chasing
               after the animals.

                                   THOMAS
                         What's happenin'?

                                   ISOBEL
                             (laughing)
                         Come, Thomas!

               She takes his hand and they begin to run.



               EXT. FOREST - MOMENTS LATER

               Isobel and Thomas dart between the trees, LAUGHING, as she
               pulls him along.

                                   ISOBEL
                         Faster, Thomas, or ye'll miss it!

                                   THOMAS
                         What will I miss, love?

               She gives him a sly glance over her shoulder.

                                   ISOBEL
                         Ye'll see.

               The trees become a blur as their speed increases
               exponentially, light and shadow blending together in liquid
               effect.  Thomas' feet no longer touch the ground.

               Suddenly, he FALLS, landing on his back. He remains still for
               a moment, catching his breath.  

               He sits up and looks around. All is silent and still. Light
               spills through the trees and branches to the ground,
               revealing that Isobel is gone. 

                                   THOMAS
                         Alison?

               He spins around frantically.

                                   THOMAS (CONT'D)
                         Alison?  Where are ye?  

               A VOICE whispers his name, its direction indistinct.

                                   WHISPERED VOICE (V.O.)
                         Thomas...

               A look of relief comes over his features.

                                   THOMAS
                             (chuckles)
                         Oh, a game, is it?  I'll find ye,
                         my love...

               Thomas runs through the trees again, following the VOICE as
               it continues to WHISPER his name.

               A flash of a RED up ahead.  Thomas sees it and hesitates.

                                   WHISPERED VOICE (V.O.)
                         Follow what ye see...

               He pursues the color as it winks in and out amongst the
               trees.  It suddenly turns right, pausing long enough for
               Thomas to see that it's a FOX.  

               It peers at him over its shoulder, as if encouraging him to
               follow.  Thomas gives chase.

               He gains on it.  He's now within reach.  The fox runs into a
               clearing and stops, turning to face him.

               Thomas watches in amazement as the fox is TRANSFORMED into
               Isobel!

                                   THOMAS
                         Alison!

               He gathers her in his arms and swings her around.

                                   ISOBEL
                             (correcting him mildly)
                         Isobel.

                                   THOMAS
                         I don' care what ye call yerself in
                         this place.  Ye are now and will
                         always be my Alison!

                                   ISOBEL
                         No matter.  I've many names.  
                             (beat)
                         Ye caught the fox, Thomas.

                                   THOMAS
                         I did indeed!

               He sets her down slowly, and they melt into each other's
               arms, the sky darkening and stars twinkling into place as
               they kiss...